Rez the Falcon (V2)

(I decided to redo Rez's character bio to give some more detail about Rez as a character.)

Name: Rez
Nicknames: None
Age: 16
Species: Falcon
Gender: M
Occupation: Adventurer

Appearance:
Rez stands at an average height for mobians at 3'2''. He has feathers on the back of his head that look like three upward curving spikes, and tail feathers that fork out into three curved points. He has gold eyes, a yellow beak, and his feathers are a light blue color. He wears a red scarf that his parents gave him as a child. For footwear, Rez has white and blue sneakers with a diagonal yellow stripe on both sides. He also wears white gloves and socks.

References:



PERSONALITY TRAITS

Likes:
• Exploring
• His friends
• Tacos

Dislikes:
• People fighting
• Eggman
• Having to sit still

Personality:
Rez is a cocky, free spirited mobian. He loves a good challenge and is always up for adventure. But he is also kind, and will always try to do what's right.


COMBAT TRAITS

Powers:
Rez on his own is a normal mobian. However, when he fuses with his white wisp partner Spiral, he gains super speed. Using his speed, Rez has created a signature move he calls the hyper drill. He sets up like a runner and then launches into the air, spinning beak first at a very high speed. His combat style is based slightly off of breakdance moves.

Strengths:
• Rez has a microchip implant in his neck that allows him to understand the wisp language. (More on that in his backstory.)
• Rez is very good at making friends, but he mostly travels, looking for adventure so he doesn't meet a whole lot of people.

Weaknesses:
• Since Rez gets his powers from his wisp partner, if you can separate them, then Rez is majorly handicapped.
• Rez always tries to look out for others, so he would rather risk his life than have someone else get hurt.


SOCIAL INFORMATION

Positive relations
• Spiral - Wisp partner

• Terry the Bobcat - Rez's best friend since they were kids

• Lux the Wolf - Rez met Lux when exploring in the Mystic Cave Zone on West Side Island, where he mostly hangs out. He has a magic crystal that gives him psychokinetic powers.

• Xenox the Gizoid - Read his backstory for info.
sonicrpnation.forumotion.com/t5150-xenox-the-gzoid

Negative relations
None


BACKSTORY

Rez, for most of his life, lived in a small town outside of Capital City with his parents, and his best friend Terry the Bobcat. Terry and Rez met one day when some older kids were playing keep away with Rez's scarf. Terry saw what was happening and told the other kids to back off. The bullies gave Rez his scarf back, but the leader of the group then punched Terry so hard it knocked him over. Unbeknownst to everyone else, Terry got angry very easily. He got back up and fought off all of the kids that were picking on Rez. From then on, Rez nicknamed his savior Fury, and they hung out all the time. Until one day, years later, when hundreds of badniks invaded their town led by Eggman. Sonic had just been captured after his fight with Infinite. The town was decimated. Terry wanted to fight back, but Rez convinced Terry to hide with him and several other mobians in an abandoned house. One of the mobians said that he was a scientist and he was working on an experimental project that might be able to help them, but his lab was several miles away in a nearby desert. After thinking it over, the group decided that they would go to the lab. Once the coast was clear, they rushed as fast as they could to the desert. After walking for about two hours, they made it to the lab. Once inside, the scientist gave each of the mobians an implant in their neck. One of the mobians asked what it was for. The scientist said that he called called the implant an H-G-O Chip. It would allow them to use a wisp's color power without completely transforming, and would also let them communicate with wisps. The scientist asked the group who was the strongest. Terry proudly stepped forward. The scientist then led Terry into a testing room full of machines. The scientist told Terry through a speaker from behind protective glass that he would be paired with a purple frenzy wisp. Terry gave him a thumbs up. The scientist pressed a button on his console, and a purple frenzy wisp came out of the hatch. Terry absorbed the wisp, He didn't feel any different. Suddenly, Terry held his hands to his head, screaming in pain, until he finally dropped to his knees. The scientist asked Terry if he was okay. No response. Rez called out Terry's name. Sill nothing. Moments after, Terry stood up with his head down. He then looked up to reveal that his eyes were glowing a bright yellow and glowing purple stripes had appeared across his face. Terry then rushed at the glass, punching it so hard it almost shattered. Everyone jumped back in shock. Rez thought this was getting out of hand. He ran through the door of the room, despite the scientist saying that it was too dangerous. He ran over to Terry and tried to talk him into calming down, Terry responded, but not in the way Rez was expecting. Terry grabbed Rez and threw him across the room, slamming into the wall of the testing chamber. The other mobians ran away fear. Rez tried to get up, but he blacked out from the concussive force of being thrown into a wall. When he came to, all Rez saw was a destroyed laboratory and Terry still in a fit of rage, destroying everything in sight. Rez got up and realized that there was no way he would be able to stop Terry on his own. He started to make a run for the door when he heard someone call for help. Rez looked around for where the voice came from. It was coming from the other side of the room. Rez saw a white boost wisp stuck underneath a pile of scrap. Rez ran over to the wisp. He helped them out and the wisp thanked Rez for coming back to help them. Rez then saw that Terry heard him and was now charging towards him. The wisp noticed Terry, and then went into Rez. Rez felt a rush of energy through his whole body. He then sped off past Terry and out the door at speeds he never thought possible. He ran and ran trying to figure out how to stop. Eventually, Rez splashed into a big lake, immediately stopping. He swam back to dry land and realized that he was on his own now. The wisp then came out of Rez and floated in front of him. Rez thanked the wisp for helping him escape. Rez noticed that the antennae on this wisp were not straight like they normally should be, but rather curled in a spiral shape. Rez said that he would call the wisp Spiral. The wisp said they liked that name. He then remembered Terry was still back at the lab. He asked Spiral if he would help him. Spiral agreed and flew back into Rez. Rez then rushed off back to the lab, this time, slowing down before he ran into anything. Once they made it back, Rez walked inside. Terry was nowhere to be seen. All that was left was a destroyed building. Rez dropped to his knees, punching the ground. A tear dripped down his face. He felt devastated. His town was destroyed, and he had lost his best friend. Rez heard a voice in his head tell him everything would be okay. It was Spiral's voice. "I'll be your friend. If you want," Spiral said. "I'd like that. I'd like that a lot," Rez responded. Since then, Rez and Spiral have gone on many adventures, searching for Terry everywhere they go. Rez hoping that one day, he can reunite with his friend and help him be normal again.

Good job there bud. I think this new version of your character sheet is better.

Although if I may, I think your backstory could benefit from being seperated into smaller paragraphes for reading conveniences. It's only a minor setback but considering how readable the rest of it would make the overall thing good.

Yeah. I kinda noticed that after I posted it. XP